Bugs
Dialogue: Brother Sortel --
"Lets say that" -- should be "Let's say that"
"Unfortunately been informed by Darima that, something is upsetting him." -- should be "Unfortunately, I've been informed by Darima that something is upsetting him."
"Yes I did, he should be here by now I don't -" -- should be "Yes I did. He should be here by now. I don't -"
"civilians in harms way" -- should be "civilians in harm's way"
Fixed all these. ~~Grinkles
Dialogue: Caretaker Kolsaz ---
"busy with my reseach" should be "busy with my research"
Prompt with Kolsaz -- "How, all I got you were those ferns." should be "How? All I got you were those ferns."
"A throw back to" should be "A throwback to"
Fixed all these. ~~Grinkles
Dialogue: Scout Leader Azzyk --
"getting to close" -- should be "getting too close"
"Thats the short" -- should be "That's the short"
"Meet me in in Refuge" -- should be "Meet me in Refuge" -- note: in Forest of the Fallen
Prompt with Azzyk -- "Lets not be too hasty" -- should be "Let's not be too hasty"
"No we'll have to" -- should be "No, we'll have to"
"fairly straight forward kind" -- should be "fairly straightforward kind"
"Usually most of them are off on patrol much farther north of the island than here, but they stop back here fairly regularly, and always have some scouring the area.'" -- recommend changing to "Most of them are off on patrols in the north of the Empire. But they stop here regularly, and there are always some hunting in the glaciers."
"two locations, Forest of the Fallen and" -- should be "two locations, the Forest of the Fallen and"
Prompt with Azzyk -- "Whats so important" should be "What's so important"
"Thats the thing, its pretty" -- should be "That's the thing, it's pretty"
"I'm sure they'll come a point" should be "I'm sure there'll come a point" or "I'm sure there will come a point"
Fixed all these. ~~Grinkles
Dialogue: Sister Borlida --
"Sortel, its time to start" -- should be "Sortel, it's time to start"
"go ahead with the operation.." -- should be "go ahead with the operation."
"once more in laymans terms" -- should be "once more in layman's terms"
Fixed all these. ~~Grinkles
Dialogue: Tactician Nazdrak --
"the supplys from" -- should be "the supplies from"
"to have Playername, deliver the package" -- should be "to have Playername deliver the package"
"While we do that Playername, will rally some of our people." should be "While we do that, Playername will rally some of our people."
"the regular people will have done the killing" -- should be "the regular people will kill them" or "the regular people will be able to kill them"
Fixed all these. ~~Grinkles
Dialogue: Master Kair`Got --
"we have sat by idly too long" -- should be "we have sat idly by too long" or "we have sat by too long"
Fixed. ~~Grinkles
Dialogue: Misc -- various refuge NPC refer to the Bloodied Quarry as the Bloody Quarry -- should probably change dialogue to Bloodied
Fixed all these. ~~Grinkles
Quest: it is possible to continue Silver Crown quests until the Sergeant rank without upgrading your Silvercrown Hireling's Pips (i.e., doing Corporal & Soldier rank quests without the actual rank), which leads to the interesting situation where you're told to hand in your soldier pips but don't have them (if you go back to heartlands and hand in your hireling pips to the trader there you can be promoted straight to sergeant however).
String: When you activate a tome, it gives a message of "You begin learning from this codex." and "This is your currently active codex." -- given the recent changes you made this should read tome not codex.
Suggestions
Loot: In Tasinath, Land of Bliss -- there are enchanted armor trash mobs (a viigilant wind spirit & an armored wind spirit) that currently drop pieces of platemail -- it would be nice to see them drop pieces of pet armor instead -- (there is a named enchanted armor that could also drop similar: Tshilakah the Warder).
Zone: add a zoneout from Catacombs to Eldenal's Mansion