Wrote a book. Making it avalible to all

MarrikBroom

Dalayan Beginner
First book i"ve managed to write is a collection of short stories. I've got steampunk, cyberpunk, mythic meets modern, superheroes, random oddball stuff. Sadly because I haven't been able to afford a good solid reputable editor I've had to do the work myself, and master of the english language i am not. Still, I'm done. It will be out in print and for the iphone/crackberry sometime next month give or take how negotiations go.


In the meantime, have a PDF

Blue Shadows and Other Stories


Distributed under a creative commons 3.0 attribute/non-commercial/share-alike license.


Enjoy :)
 
Only got a chance to read the first 2 chapters so far, pretty good stuff man. I will let you know more as I finish more. But as I said very good so far!
 
Read the first one, have some input on phrasing, overuse of commas, how to restructure and say the same thing, all kinds of stuff. The storyline is good, don't take this as criticism, I'm just really good at proofreading. PM me if interested in free input.
 
Dude. Feedback! Awesome!


I don't take it as an insult. It's when the stories themselves start making no sense whatsoever that I'd start worrying. Until then I'm just going to take what commentary comes and be thankful for it.
 
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