Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation Errors #2

I haven't raided since last year, but this was one I don't see mentioned so far here:

NPC Name: Eyes of the Father
Location: Prison
Sentence with Error: The Eyes of the Father lock their gazef onto both
Correction: The Eyes of the Father lock their gaze onto both
 
I haven't raided since last year, but this was one I don't see mentioned so far here:

NPC Name: Eyes of the Father
Location: Prison
Sentence with Error: The Eyes of the Father lock their gazef onto both
Correction: The Eyes of the Father lock their gaze onto both

This one appears to have been corrected already.

NPC Name: Caretaker Kolsaz
Location: Dreadlands
Sentence with Error: When I reflect on where I've been, and where I am now, I can't help but see a series of bad decisions followed by attempts to make ammends.
Correction: amends

NPC Name: Caretaker Kolsaz
Location: Dreadlands
Sentence with Error: Every time it back fired... things got worse.
Correction: backfired

NPC Name: Scout Leader Azzyk
Location: Dreadlands
Sentence with Error: I'm just nervous thats all.
Correction: that's

NPC Name: Scout Leader Azzyk
Location: Dreadlands
Sentence with Error: Lets stick to them.
Correction: Let's

NPC Name: Brother Sinqual
Location: Dreadlands
Sentence with Error: And when that happen we'll have you to thank Haenir.
Correction: happens

NPC Name: Sister Borlida
Location: Dreadlands
Sentence with Error: But if you are serious about one day beating him, doing what he can't becomes neccesary.'
Correction: necessary
 
Psalm of the Four description
Location: bards
Sentence with error: "A soothing psalm telling the tale of the earliest struggle of the Four and their decision share the world between themselves in sacred balance, increasing all of your allies' elemental resistances."
Corrections: "decision to share"; "between themselves" is semi-redundant; this song increases all resistances, not just "elemental" so probably cut that word out.

...more to come
 
Pets (or possible other neutral gender mobs) - the target of spell messages.
Location: all

The possessive form used in ALL of the pet spell messages seems to be "their" as opposed to "its". Assuming the spell only targets one pet, this should be a singular possessive pronoun.
 
NPC Name: Wexford
Location: Surefall Glade
Sentence with Error: Wexford says, 'To recreate the house for the spirit I am going to need Lightstone dust, and a lot of it. Not only that but there are still bits and pieces of the blade that are missing, these pieces would probably be found deeper within the cavern you found the intial [sic] pieces due to them being blasted the furthest away when it was shattered.'
Correction: initial
 
NPC Name: Kirlin, Priestess of Althuna
Location: North Newport
Sentence with Error: Weild your Guard of Purity well, and come back to me when you feel able to complete the next step of the Trial.'
Correction: Wield

Note: This same error repeats in the progression of the quest (4 times).
 
NPC Name: a burning spirit
Location: Tower of Tarhyl
Sentence with Error: The tribes are the Flare Fiends, the Burning Legion, the Djar, the Flame Talon, the Mephar, the Bloodfire and finally the Farhag.
Correction: Bloodfire, and
(Oxford comma ftw)

NPC Name: a burning spirit
Location: Tower of Tarhyl
Sentence with Error: The Flare Fiends as twisted and sadistic as even the worst of Sivyana's followers.
Correction: Fiends are as

NPC Name: a burning spirit
Location: Tower of Tarhyl
Sentence with Error: Lead by Arch Fiend Ghanerizoc, they are a blunt instrument which will one day destroy Sivyana and scour her meddling from the planes.
Correction 1: Led
Correction 2: Ghanherizoc

NPC Name: a burning spirit
Location: Tower of Tarhyl
Sentence with Error: The Burning Legion are the home guard of the Flamelords tower.
Correction: Flame Lord's

NPC Name: a burning spirit
Location: Tower of Tarhyl
Sentence with Error: Stout men made entirely of molten rock and flame, The Legion is lead by the first of their kind--High Warden Ansaag.
Correction 1: the
Correction 2: led

NPC Name: a burning spirit
Location: Tower of Tarhyl
Sentence with Error: The Caliph Askaril rules over the Djar alongside his last remaining concubine.'
Correction: favorite
(Lore correction: seems odd to say Askaril only has one concubine when he's surrounded by eight)

NPC Name: a burning spirit
Location: Tower of Tarhyl
Sentence with Error: Their patriarchal society led by the one we call Dawnfire.
Correction: society is led

NPC Name: a burning spirit
Location: Tower of Tarhyl
Sentence with Error: What they lack in intelligence and cunning, they make up for in an absolute lack of fear and single minded bloodlust.
Correction: single-minded
 
NPC Name: an old hermit
Location: Azzerach, the Forsaken Realm
Sentence with Error: I won't go into the details, but he stranded me here, with the other cast offs of Tarhyl.'
Correction: castoffs
Note: the dialogue prompt following this also makes the same error

NPC Name: an old hermit
Location: Azzerach, the Forsaken Realm
Sentence with Error: This land is unstable at its best, and let me assure you it's far from best at the moment.'
Correction: from its best

NPC Name: an old hermit
Location: Azzerach, the Forsaken Realm
Sentence with Error: It is not anybodies natural state.
Correction: anybody's

NPC Name: an old hermit
Location: Azzerach, the Forsaken Realm
Sentence with Error: The second, Cala Suhyab, is at war with Cala Hakim.
Correction: Suhayb

NPC Name: an old hermit
Location: Azzerach, the Forsaken Realm
Sentence with Error: Mainly Tarhyl's 'cast offs'.
Correction: castoffs
Note: the dialogue prompt following this also makes the same error

NPC Name: a spectral haunter
Location: Valley of Erimal
Sentence with Error: a spectral haunter slowly drifts to the floor, starting to fade from existance.
Correction: existence
 
NPC Name: Clockwork
Location: The Rust
Sentence with Error: Quite curtious of you to ask.
Correction: courteous
 
NPC Name: Curator Nihiliti
Location: The Overgrowth
Sentence with Error: Hello Wood Elf I am sorry to inform you that we are currently booked, but if there is something else I could accomidate you with I would be happy to oblige.
Correction: accomodate
 
NPC Name: Healer Deshuva Shahar (and all other Healer NPCs)
Location: The Mountain Crags of Tarhyl (other Healer NPC zones)
Sentence with Error: Identification spells may clear any doubt you have about a specific thing, and we shall require three specific, seperate markers.
Correction: separate

NPC Name: Okyarna Rehn
Location: Southern Wastes of Tarhyl
Sentence with Error: The fabric is soft and smooth to the touch--the ash and soot covering it seems to be part of the matieral itself.
Correction 1: seem
Correction 2: material
 
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NPC Name: Ranger General Shedari
Location: Surefall Glade
Sentence with Error: I have been told that a wraith-like creature which seems to comendeer the other undead has been spotted in the ruins at the dead of night.
Correction: ...creature, which seems to command the other undead, has...
 
NPC Name: The Funeral Guardian
Location: Crytho Malath
Sentence with Error: The ground beings to rumble.
Correction: begins
 
NPC Name: Nevaldeen Rehn
Location: Southern Wastes of Tarhyl
Sentence with Error: Gather the compontents she asked for.
Correction: components
 
NPC Name: Judge Rouf Stoutmane (error is in player /cm D# response)
Location: City of Mercy
Sentence with Error: To make sure justice is servered, at any cost
Correction 1: served
Correction 2 (missing period): cost.

NPC Name: Judge Rouf Stoutmane (error is in player /cm D# response)
Location: City of Mercy
Sentence with Error: To insure the innocent are protected, and guitly punished.
Correction: guilty

NPC Name: Judge Rouf Stoutmane
Location: City of Mercy
Sentence with Error: I don't know if thats really how I should do things, but thats how I feel.
Correction 1: that's
Correction 2: that's

NPC Name: Judge Rouf Stoutmane (error is in player /cm D# response)
Location: City of Mercy
Sentence with Error: Sorry, continue, didn't mean to interupt.
Correction: interrupt

NPC Name: Judge Rouf Stoutmane
Location: City of Mercy
Sentence with Error: Well interupt ya did.
Correction: interrupt

NPC Name: Judge Rouf Stoutmane
Location: City of Mercy
Sentence with Error: I am sure you won't dissappoint, {{playername}}, but be careful... they always start small...
Correction: disappoint

NPC Name: High Priest Rodger
Location: City of Mercy
Sentence with Error: I can tell by the look in your eyes that you have failed... its ok I wasn't reallly expecting anything more.
Correction 1: it's
Correction 2: OK or okay
Correction 3: really

NPC Name: High Priest Rodger
Location: City of Mercy
Sentence with Error: Ok here are a few coins like I promised.
Correction: OK or okay

NPC Name: High Priest Rodger
Location: City of Mercy
Sentence with Error: Go there and don't dissappoint.
Correction: disappoint

NPC Name: Eisa of the Rose
Location: City of Mercy
Sentence with Error: Even with the Private acting in an unhonorable way, you still came out ahead.
Correction: dishonorable

NPC Name: Smith Mithrilhart
Location: City of Mercy
Sentence with Error: Been some trouble there lately, and prices are up a lot, but thats not really the issue.
Correction: that's

NPC Name: Smith Mithrilhart (error is in player /cm D# response)
Location: City of Mercy
Sentence with Error: Thats terrible!
Correction: That's

NPC Name: Eisa of the Rose
Location: City of Mercy
Sentence with Error: He should be stationed near the silvercrown, but far enough away from them, that they shouldn't interfere with the lessons.
Correction: Silver Crown

NPC Name: Emote triggered by passing various wards in the zone
Location: City of Mercy
Sentence with Error: You feel a power coarse over you, but it does not try to harm you.
Correction: course
 
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NPC Name: Warden Wevrynn
Location: The Overgrowth
Sentence with Error: It feels unnatural, as if it seeks to corrupt to this world.
Correction: corrupt this

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