Well, I just posted my stories up on the Roleplaying board (http://wintersroar.com/phpbb2/viewtopic.php?t=3177&sid=bf457b70ec8a7db43fb8af775038cd4c) and would like to advertise it. I wants critism! Hopefully constructive, but that's all in your hands now.
Oh, and did I over do the language? I experimented a lot with the writing style, and while I like most of it, it has a feel that I'm not quite used to. /shrug.
Oh, and did I over do the language? I experimented a lot with the writing style, and while I like most of it, it has a feel that I'm not quite used to. /shrug.