Textual Considerations:
Stance (4) Guarding Blade <Increase Hate, Parry>: "Soandso shifts their blade into a defensive position."
This really doesn't make sense, because one can use the stance with a hammer, staff, bare hands, etc.
Suggestion:
1) Change the name to "Merciful Guard" - The origin of this name is thematic to other Paladin related "Mercy" things. Additionally, since the stance increases hate generation and parry, it makes sense. In choosing to focus on parrying attacks (rather than say, riposting) the paladin is showing mercy toward foes. And mobs hate to be shown mercy.
2) Change message to "Soandso's guard becomes focused."
Stance (5) Cleansing Blade <Increase Crits>: "Soandso's weapon takes on a holy gleam."
Again, the same concern regarding the word "blade" for a stance usable with all weapons.
Suggestion:
(1) Change the name to "Holy Wrath" - Again, more thematic for paladins.
Stance (6) Stoical Will <Immunity to Fear, Charm, Mesmerize>: "Soandso gathers their will into a stoic shield."
Is it really the Paladin's will that protects him/her from mental influences? I mean sure, all the time spent praying in uncomfortable positions, and holding night time vigils may make a paladin stoic... in body. It is the paladin's religious conviction and purity that makes him/her mentally stoic.
Suggestion:
(1) Change name to "Mental Purity." This fits more in line with existing Paladin theme.
(2) Change message to "Soandso's eyes gleam with faith." or "Soandso's mind fills with religious fervor."
Stance (4) Guarding Blade <Increase Hate, Parry>: "Soandso shifts their blade into a defensive position."
This really doesn't make sense, because one can use the stance with a hammer, staff, bare hands, etc.
Suggestion:
1) Change the name to "Merciful Guard" - The origin of this name is thematic to other Paladin related "Mercy" things. Additionally, since the stance increases hate generation and parry, it makes sense. In choosing to focus on parrying attacks (rather than say, riposting) the paladin is showing mercy toward foes. And mobs hate to be shown mercy.
2) Change message to "Soandso's guard becomes focused."
Stance (5) Cleansing Blade <Increase Crits>: "Soandso's weapon takes on a holy gleam."
Again, the same concern regarding the word "blade" for a stance usable with all weapons.
Suggestion:
(1) Change the name to "Holy Wrath" - Again, more thematic for paladins.
Stance (6) Stoical Will <Immunity to Fear, Charm, Mesmerize>: "Soandso gathers their will into a stoic shield."
Is it really the Paladin's will that protects him/her from mental influences? I mean sure, all the time spent praying in uncomfortable positions, and holding night time vigils may make a paladin stoic... in body. It is the paladin's religious conviction and purity that makes him/her mentally stoic.
Suggestion:
(1) Change name to "Mental Purity." This fits more in line with existing Paladin theme.
(2) Change message to "Soandso's eyes gleam with faith." or "Soandso's mind fills with religious fervor."
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